Friday, May 9, 2008

for my mom............luv her a lot

If I could give my mom the world
Or anything she wanted,
I'd give her my own heart and soul
And leave my own heart haunted.


I'd take upon myself her life
With all its strife and pain,
And let her ease into some space
Where she could live again.


The pain for me would not be pain,
At least not for a while;
For I'd be doing it for her,
And I would see her smile.


I wish that I could take her heart
And cleanse it with my tears,
And make her sorrow go away,
And answer all her fears.


I wish, I wish, but then I can't,
As I watch helplessly,
And take her in my arms
and sayI wish that it were me.


But loving is a hard, hard way,
With all the pain it brings.
And yet there is no other way
To touch the heart of things.

7 comments:

ShijoSeban said...

Very nice thoughts about mom
really fantastic

have a nice day

shweta said...

@shijoseban

thank u
thots can never actually express all our feelings,i mean the feelings evry has for their mom

leopiya said...

beautiful...
we write on so many thing.. but very few write abt tehir moms these days...
keep writing!
:)

Ankur Shukla said...

Thats an awesome poem...i loved it. I dont know u but saw yr blog thru one of our common friends...too good i must say.....

Rohan said...

Woah..brilliant work there :)

Cheers to our moms..!!

Loved it..jus loved it!!:)

Sandeep said...

I wonder how your mom felt after she saw this entry. I will have a guess....She must have said....
'Nice feelings for your mom...But all I want is you to lead a happy life and rise to my expectations. After all your happiness is my happiness'

It's true, words dont suffice to express our true feelings.

Albeit, your feelings for your mom on this blog convey to the reader that indeed you are very caring.

Anonymous said...

hii Shweta

nice blog and good poems...why dont u get these published?

:)